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If you wish to know the true charicter of a man, you cannot listen to the truths of others, nor the truths of the subject. For those around a man observe him and judge him, yet do not know the insites that are locked behind the cold lifeless eyes.
Also you cannot believe the thoughts that a man professes from his mouth, for who among us is truely in comprehinsion of his life.
The only one who truely knows a man is the one who looks through the lies, and in his eyes.
If you are willing to give in at times, and stay strong at others. If you are willing to endure the pain and embrace the joy.
True love is the knife that both cuts the holders seperate, and stiches them same, yet alows the spilt blood to mingle and unbreakably unite.
That same knife however, is the blade which pierces the heart of deception, slaying the foul captor of true vision. Alowing the sweet child to run into the embrace of the holder of the blade, who alone waits with arms held wide.

To live ones life free from the constraints of judgement is truely bliss.

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The following comments are for "Random thoughts V"
by crackpotpoet

random lies

You can say that again-I hear you loud and clear. One must rid of the tunnel vision and weed out the lies.



( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: April 28, 2006 )

random thoughts v
there were lots of mistakes in spelling but I tried to ignore them and read what was intended and I think I like it.

( Posted by: unseenwriterx [Member] On: May 3, 2006 )

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