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Donít make me happy, I thrive on the pain.
Donít whisper sweet nothings, I wonít tell you again!
I see things more clearly when Iím looking through tears,
When somebody hurts me, itís then that the smoke clears.
Donít you know that pain is good for the soul?
It helps us mere humans reach our life goal.
Donít think that your hugs make me hate you any less,
Now that youíve hurt me, Iím at my best.
Being all that happy never suited me much,
This way I can give my own special touch.
So when you next see me and Iím looking forlorn,
Remember youíve left me in very top form!

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The following comments are for "Donít make me happy"
by Man Eating Maniac


There is not much to say, except I'm not in agreance with your view here...

Albeit, pain is inevitable and a part of mortal life/strife... It seems as though you can't enjoy without it (in this piece...)

Hope that's not so... Tragic lot in life if it is...

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: August 18, 2004 )

this piece
i think i was putting on a mask for this one, i don't think it was how i really felt about the situation, it was just what i wanted to portray.

( Posted by: man eating maniac [Member] On: August 19, 2004 )

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