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the art
the devotion
my time
my energy
my power
my imagination
spent
gone
blown like
pinstriping across
your wall
it drove me mad
even insane
my imagination
my time
my life
all spent to find
an answer
that doesnt exsist
my life
gone
spent
blown like
pinstriping across
your wall
you couldnt save me
no one could
mt time
my life
my days
my hours
of unanswerd questions
my life
spent
gone
blown like
pinstriping across
your wall
i gave you questions
and i wanted
answers
but you didnt care
or mabey you
didnt want me to know
were you embarassed
of what you had done
was i wrong
to say i loved you
my life
gone
spent
blown like
pinstriping across
your wall
apolished table
so many grains
so many millions died in vain
their lives
gone
spent
forgotten
destroyed
like taking a sander
to that polished table
to ruin the finish
made in devotion
by an artists hands
would you destroy
your own creation
you you kill
your own time
did so many deaths
take to prove
that a genocide
wont solve your
problems
that killing
milllions wont save
your mind
to kill one life
is like killing a world
you have forced me
tto this
my life
gone
spent
blown like
pinstriping across
your wall
my life falls in drops
to your table

dedicated in the memory of:
rawanda
the holocaust
genocide in darfur
and all lives taken
without remores
dedicted
to the dead of september 11
twin towers
dedicated to all those killed
without justice to their killers



------
i am a misuderstood lunatic


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The following comments are for "pinstripe"
by schindees

tears..
it makes me cry to hear the truth,these things that happen, yet you made me happy when you wrote this poem. its the truth, and i wish these things wern't happening.

( Posted by: grandmasgirl [Member] On: April 27, 2006 )





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