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There was a girl named Nickol who went to get help for herself. She left him all by himself. While she was away getting help she found some friends. While she was enjoying herself the phone rang. Nickol's mother called and said,"Do you know Derek Brown?" "Yes I do." Well he has been shot and has died,he was killed instantly. That's what was said by someone but,while I was away he was suffering. I should have been the one that was shot. All because I left him all by himself. Nickol came home and cut herself she could not deal with it anymore. Now I should die because I shouldn't have left him alone so I could get help.

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Nickol Buckler


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by daddyslittlegirl

hey
Hey, well I know that this is none of your concern but I woudld like to let you know that, while the instance in the story is completely different then the pain I am going through, the emotion you expressed helped me a little. If the situation you are talking about actually hapened, or if it a simbolism for another thing you have had happen to you, then I offer you my most sencear simpathy's. If not, then I pray you shall never feal the pain that insues. Thank you for your time Nickol. John.

( Posted by: crackpotpoet [Member] On: April 27, 2006 )





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