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why doeslife go on for me? You take everybody that I love,I don\'t deserve to live so I have one question. Why? Why does it hurt so much,why wont you let it end? Why can\'t I cut,why do you love me? Why can\'t I push you away,why can\'t I push you out? Why do you stick around,why do you care? Why do I deserve you,why do I trust you? Why can\'t I hate you,why can;t I stop loving you? Why are you still here,why can\'t I cut? Why did I fall in love with you,why don\'t you leave like everybody else does? Why do people hurt each other and why do I have to stay alive? Why?

Nickol Buckler

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