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Lured into a den
a lioness and prey
bewildered, fascinated,
expecting and cautious
she only asks that you
trust and relinquish
the fear you portray.
Look past her
obvious state of desire,
further than her need for
unbridled, unfiltered and
completely abandoned sex.
Peek behind the
neatly placed distractions
and find the truth.
There, lies transform into raw,
uncultured lust and urgency.
Agree to the hunt.
Be defenseless,
feign weakness and
as she overpowers you
her strength becomes your victory.

------
I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler


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The following comments are for "Seduction"
by nae411

Seduced...
Nae, I sought you out. Saw your title near mine on front page and wanted to make sue I said hey, cause I'm not here often enough... as always I knew when I read your stuff I would find something sultry. You do sultry very well!
This, I see large padding paws approaching, and a bit of nuzzle, and move in for the kill...
I am always impressed with the humidity you infuse in your poetry!

Always nice to read you! Now I have to go take a cold shower cause my baby isn't here tonight!

You are always a treat to read-
Elizabeth

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: April 29, 2006 )

Miss the boat again
It is like a movie scene -- very visual and slow enough to see all the little details and wonder why the director would put them there.

I am an old prudish type, but this really has more meaning than the obvious for me. In many situations if we bend a little and give in some we can turn someone else's strength to our benefit.

Nicely put Nae

(BTW: did you dye your hair or something? The avatar seems a little more....something?)

BW

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: May 2, 2006 )

Lucie, Emaks, BWoz
Lucie sometimes you just need a little break, glad you finished your lecture... ;0)

Miss you girl!

Emaks, LOL, your comment made me smile. Showers are good for these very occassions!

BWoz, can't believe you are the prudish type. I am glad you read it and enjoyed. I added more highlights to my hair. Thanks for noticing.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 3, 2006 )

Madam
Madam.

You lookee very nice but you writee very better. Much better than that kamasootra nonsense.

( Posted by: Gorakekalloo [Member] On: May 3, 2006 )

seduction
if you could see my blush. it is your fault for writing someting so good.

( Posted by: unseenwriterx [Member] On: May 3, 2006 )

Daniel in the Lions Den
Now I understand that passage in the bible about Danel in the lions den!

They say the females are the most dangerous of the species (and the mosy enjoyable).

Have Fun and share it!

Ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: May 5, 2006 )

Seduction is not a bad thing
Gorakekalloo, well thank you sir, of course better than that nonsense... ahem. ;0)

Unseenwriterx, should I admit that I like to make people blush? Thanks.

Oh Ivor, I guess I should forever be grateful that those lions didn't eat Daniel. Thank you for stopping by. Hugs.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 5, 2006 )

Eat Me?
Nae,
I'm not even going there, you're giving me a bad reputation already!

Ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: May 5, 2006 )

Ivor's reputation
Mr.Davies (laughing) Don't you know that one should take responsibility for ones own actions? I sir can no more give you a bad reputation than the one I have earned for myself. ;0)

You are so much fun to tease...

Having fun,
Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 5, 2006 )

Seduction
To me, it comes across as a poem about a woman who is very assertive. A born leader, whose assertiveness is intimidating to men - except maybe where sex is involved. Even in matters of pleasure though, men have to be CONVINCED to submit.

I'd taken the lines about "looking behind the distactions" as an indication that this assertive attitude wasn't limited to just sex, and a man who could see that, and love her for her STRENGTH (a strength that can be relied upon in ALL aspects of life, not just sex), would be greatly rewarded.

I love powerful/assertive women anyway; AND I spend a fair bit if time thinking about relationships, and roles that we play as husband, wife, girlfriend, boyfriend etc...

I don't know that I understood it like the author intended for it to be understood - but I thoroughly enjoyed it.

( Posted by: rajengineer [Member] On: May 5, 2006 )

Eric and Rajengineer
Thank you Eric... but me a tease? Come now, you must be chatting too much with Ivor!

Rajengineer, I'd say you understand to perfection! Thank you so much for reading. I enjoyed your comment.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 5, 2006 )

Seduction
Well I'm glad you enjoyed my comments. I've been away from the site for a while, but I remember you from a year/year and a half ago; I followed Claire to a few of your writings. I enjoyed your work then too.

I'm going to make an effort to start SERIOUSLY participating again, with respect to reading, commmenting, and posting some stuff of my own - so hopefully I'll "see" you around.

Robert

( Posted by: rajengineer [Member] On: May 5, 2006 )





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