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There is a lot to be
Said about drinking

It can certainly spice
Up your day

And doping is an
Especially great way

To while the hours away.

Now, whoring can be
Quite rewarding

In addressing yours needs
In this life

Also it comes in pretty handy

When you are in between
Husband or wife.

And smoking proves to
Be one of the best pastime
Vices you’ll find

You can enjoy it while
You are out gambling

If you are not too far
Behind.

In this life a lot has
Been written and said
On the evils of vice

But if you ask me and
I know you didn’t,

I think it can be very nice.


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Charmr


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The following comments are for "Vice Is Nice"
by Charmr

Vice
More poetic wisdom from the JYP and the way you say it always has gotten my attention. Nice write and I am looking forward to the next one...Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: May 22, 2006 )





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