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i will invite you
to crawl under the legs
and into the circle
can you be welcomed
to center ring
and i will be here
dancing the circle
no one to stop me
my never ending jig
but you are afraid
of dancing the circle
and i will be here
dancing the circle
till this song ends

i am a misuderstood lunatic

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