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drip drip drip
rain drops pound
my ears
drowning me
in the sea of memories
of rainy days
and silent hours
all with a
drip drip drip
rain drops pound
my soul
drowning me
in silent memories
a solem day
a soggy grave
drip drip drip
rain drops pound
me into silent
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i am a misuderstood lunatic


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The following comments are for "rain"
by schindees

rain...
now why in the hell would you want to do that?
seriously, just curious...interesting thought...

Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: April 25, 2006 )

more rain...
sdees, this is not half bad...actually it's not bad at all, just dreadful with emotion. I should have enlightened that earlier.
Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: April 25, 2006 )





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