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A woman is
A splendid gift from god above
Full of passions and knotted with love

An enormous stream that openly flows
With kindness that never stops but rather grows

A tender touch and a warming smile
In hard times and in every while

A loving heart that is here to share
To treat the wounds, to mend and repair

A garden of beauty and a grove of glamour
Divinely created for the man to savour

She is full of bless, wisdom and grace
That can perpetually fill the outer space

A Mother, a sister, a wife, or a daughter
She is always here for today, tomorrow and hereafter

No one can live without her
And I am proud to be a woman

April 15th 8 45pm


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The sweet is never as sweet without the sour, and I know the sour which allows me to appreciate the sweet.


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The following comments are for "Proud to be a woman"
by fairgrace

eden

This is truly a beautiful poem; it has whimsical rhythm and musical tone to it (as Tap 5000 said).
But I tend to agree with windchime in some aspects in terms of its content and meaning.
It would be nice to think of ourselves as these wonderful nurturing creatures that contribute so much to society, but in fact out “westernalized” culture fools us into thinking we are free individuals when we are still subtly oppressed in many ways, and I would not really say I am proud of that. That it a nice thought to think of ourselves as divine, graceful, repairers, and glamorous creatures running around barefoot in some garden of eden.

I loved your poem,

macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: April 30, 2006 )

Hiba
I like it very much...It says to me that we as women are God's gift to mankind...we are put on earth to be the glue to hold relationships and families together...we are healers and lovers....and sisters to our brothers...men can fix everything with duct tape but what would they ever do without us...thank you Hiba for bringing this to my attention...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: April 30, 2006 )

Women are......
A woman is, what woman are
A smart accesory to our car
A status symbol on our arm
The one who keeps our bedsheets warm

Our cook and cleaner, conscience too
The one who tells us what to do
Who keeps us on the straight and narrow
while shooting us with cupid's arrow

A woman is all of these things
But most of all a woman brings
(as Hiba states above somewhere)
a loving heart for all to share

I think that women should be proud
and sometimes even shout out loud.
Just who the hell do think you are?
I'm no accessory to your car!

Of course I'm kidding, I'm not brave
I know that in this rhyme I made
the odd remark that may be wrong
so please don't beat me with your thong.

Oh sorry, I did it again
I'll suffer from this light refrain
If I don't say I liked your rhyme
And most of women are real fine

Of course occasionally you'll find some
...... who devour men to have their fun!



( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: April 30, 2006 )

Woman
Fairgrace, I am glad you know it, say it, feel it. Women are special. We do have a gift. We are a blessing. It is nice to hear it spoken! Good for you.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 1, 2006 )

Nice
A simple exercise in punctuation.

Woman without her man is nothing!

(punctuation added)

Woman: without her, man is nothing!

I'm glad I am a man, but I am much glader there are women.

BW

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: May 2, 2006 )





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