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Tolerance
Poem

Tolerance is bouncing back,
With twice the speed
When you're thrown against
the hard wall,
Like a rubber ball.
A rectangle can't bounce,
Nor can a triangle,
For both have straight lines.
Tolerance is sensing that
What is not working now,
Would surely work
After sometime,
As everything in life
works in a cycle.
A tolerant person can
be thrown into
any situation,
He will surely emerge
victorious in the end,
As he has optimism
filled in his eyes.

By :- GSVK

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http://gsvasukumar.blogspot.com/


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The following comments are for "Tolerance"
by G.S.VASUKUMAR

Pen...Thanks..
Triangle and Rectangle are only examples..Thanks for reading and posting ur comments.

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 25, 2006 )

G.S.VASUKUMAR
Something possitive to ponder on.You make great
works,and I feel very tolerant after reading your
work.I am looking forward to reading more!
whilst

( Posted by: WHILST [Member] On: April 25, 2006 )

Tolerance
Hmmmm,,,,Having and 11 year old who thinks he knows more than you ever will, will surely teach you tolerance,,,,LOL. I dont know about you but, I'm kinda round and ya throw me against a wall, "Pftttt",, Chances are im bouncing back. Nice work G.S.
Thanks for the read.
"Keep on inkin the Pages"
Poison

( Posted by: POISON9901 [Member] On: April 25, 2006 )

tolerance
I really enjoyed it... and the rectangle and triangle is a perfect analogy to a ridgedness possessed by others... it's only when you have the ability to "bounce" that you can perservere

( Posted by: songofcree [Member] On: April 26, 2006 )

Whilst..Tolerance.
Thanks for ur nice comment and for reading all my works.

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 26, 2006 )

Steve...
I understand what u say. Having a naughty kid at home tests ur tolerance to the maximum. By the way, I too was one.

Thanks for ur comment.

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 26, 2006 )

Songofree...
Thanks for agreeing with the rectangle and triangle.

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 26, 2006 )





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