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This alien don't wanna know
Don't wanna get the glow
Just trying not to be sad
But feelings are just too bad

He's thinking why all of us
Don't let him do what he wants
Watching the Earth in this way
He'll be lost from this bay

Somewhere somehow, he got something
That could make him feel better
He doesn't wanna lose that happiness
If he could, he would bring that back

How many dats we have to try?
To let him get that he desired,
To give him at least one gift?
It seems to be just too hard (for us)!



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