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im not a person bout to die
love to live
love to laugh
love to cry
i dont hold my self
above any one but me
deppression hurts
but so does cures
im not crazy
im not goth
im not emo
and im not prep
i like to rock
till i drop
i like to partie
round the clock
just have to keep
my grades up
i like girls fun
and amusing
but the next level
gets alittle confusing
one time a man said to me
"son in life we have no time
when we are born we have no time
when we die we have no time"
and i asked this man
if we have no time
why are you telling me this
wouldnt i already know that if i had no time
id be in the grave right now
then that old man rose without complaining
and left without explaining
and so my life goes will sombody save me

------
z.s.m wolfe the
schindees


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The following comments are for "my self"
by wolfe

SPELL CHECK!
you're spelling is what's killing me.

( Posted by: TINKER [Member] On: April 22, 2006 )

SPELL CHECK!
YOUR spelling is what's killing me.

( Posted by: TINKER [Member] On: April 22, 2006 )

what does spelling matter
when sombody takes the time to write somthing from their soul does their sspelling realy matter or are you just beinga critasist

( Posted by: schindees [Member] On: April 22, 2006 )

myself
good poem but why are you angry about spelling? it would be more elevated , and well organized if u considered the spelling mistakes...

all the best
Hiba

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: April 23, 2006 )





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