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\i have waited so's making me so sad and tired and just ready to quit...\how can you not see what I feel for you? How can you just walk around oblivious to everything? Do you really think I wanted to give you up? Don't you know I put so much of my heart and soul into us that now...there is nothing left...I gave it all to you and now you want nothing to do with's amazing how much that hurts. See I thought I figured it all out..if I never fell in love then I would never get hurt...well that went down the drain because I just couldn't resist you and now I pay for that everyday...but I guess when they say it is better to love and lost then to never have loved at all they are definitely right because if I had never loved you then I never would have found myself...I will always love you and I will never let the dream or hope of us being together day...and maybe one day you will wake up and realize that I never have or will stop loving you and that will make things all right will make us happy again....well those are my thoughts for the day

Peace Out

~~~dream as if you'll live as if you'll die today~~~


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