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She takes her newly sharpend knife and holds it up to her wrist. Life's been hell these last couple of years. Now it's time to end it all. All this pain. All these lies. She looks in the mirror and says, "How can poeple be so crul? All I ever wanted to do was live a happy life, but they made it so hard. Now it's time to give them what they want." With tears in her eyes she takes the knife and cuts , digging deep-deeper than ever before. Blood drips all over the floor. Things are getting blurry. It's getting hard for her to see. A man walks in. "What are you doing?" he shouts, But he's much to late. she slowly slips away. She's now in a dark peaceful place, were she can finally be happy.

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Truth is... every person that you meet is going to break your heart ..... you just have to dexide who's worth it.


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The following comments are for "Good-Bye"
by saitansprincess

Okay
Not everybody is going to hurt you. It is not worth hurting yourself. You will make it through it I promise and I am here to get you through it.

( Posted by: daddyslittlegirl [Member] On: April 22, 2006 )

strange
You know i've always thought about life as something stupid and pointless, if you meet someone then you meet them they break your heart and there is no point to like them again...thats my life i guess.. i like this gothic peace, its simple and gets to the point of alot of other people. i like it :)

( Posted by: starmaiden [Member] On: April 25, 2006 )

Truly amazing.
I really like the way you allowed a reader to know that it was not the first time she had cut herself, but that it was definitely the last. I can't imagine what would make you write it, but I understand why you would. Its terrific. Good job.

( Posted by: Rocky [Member] On: June 12, 2006 )

my reason
i wanted to write from my soul of what i mosted wanted at the time, and well that was it.

( Posted by: saitansprincess [Member] On: June 12, 2006 )





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