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come creep in,
teeth deepen in my head's reason,
deeper in my throughts bleeding,
keeping me alive, leaving.

come take me,
brake a neverending chain, save me,
from decaying, in a twisted game,
that death is always playing.

come love me,
till the suns last's breath envolopes us.

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