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you caught my eye
i met you on the bus
one morning you noticed me
sitting the next seat over
and thas how it started
you became intreseted
soon i did too
ask asked you for your digits
and we both exchanged
the next week over
i had a note
a match book note
i look in my memory on the flap
it said "will you be my girl friend"
damned a good idea it was
you took it you read and
the answer waz yes
we kissed
we hugged
we laghed
we talked
but now i am alone
againg lost without my matches




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i am a misuderstood lunatic


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