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Vision

It is seeing something,
Clearly which isn't
Present there.
It is dreaming something,
Which can materialise.
It is being there in
The near future,
The way you visualize
In the present.

By :- GSVK

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http://gsvasukumar.blogspot.com/


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by G.S.VASUKUMAR

g.s.
tell me if im wrong but i have two interpratations after reading it a few times
my first time reading waz dont count your eggs before they hatch but then my second time my understanding is that every thing you do every thing you say right now and in your past affects your present

( Posted by: schindees [Member] On: April 19, 2006 )

vision

Exactly how I would have imagined/visualized it, non-concrete, material. Itís funny itís always the way my visions are always in the present. I enjoyed this very much.

macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: April 20, 2006 )

Schindees..
Thanks for ur comment. Ur interpretation is wright.

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 22, 2006 )

Macbeth...
Thanks a lot for reading and liking my poem.

Take care...

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 22, 2006 )

Vision
Thank you for your comment on "How long will death
elude me?"
Yes, vision does seem a mystery sometimes.
A wise person has the knowledge to question such things. I love your work. Keep posting. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

whilst

( Posted by: whilst [Member] On: April 22, 2006 )

Whilst...
Thanks.

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 25, 2006 )

Keep writing!
Good-stuff!

( Posted by: whilst [Member] On: April 25, 2006 )





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