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once again
i'm trying to fathom the bottom
but i never once saw it
while falling.

it seems inevitable.
i'll go over the edge again.
still, i cling desperately
standing close to the edge
i grasp nothing but fragile masks
and empty words.
this always happens
now matter how i kick or scream
once in a while
i get swallowed up in the darkness

but then
it will stop after awhile
and a few pages never to be read
everything would seem the same again
as if its but a passing thought
a dream
already half forgotten in telling.

as if nothing happened

nothing did

"...yesterday is only a dream, tomorrow, but a vision..."

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