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Life deals the cards and with them,
I try and do the best I can.
Sometimes I have a winner,
sometimes it's how I play the hand.

I try to keep the good cards
and toss the bad ones to the side,
then hope I get more good ones
out of the deck wherein they hide.

Some days it really seems,
that there's no way for me to win,
I find it's best to say I quite today,
tomorrow I'll try again.

But no matter, I must keep playing,
trying harder every day,
and some how it seems to even out,
just deal the cards, I'm ready to play...

------
Kathie Phillips


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The following comments are for "Life Deals the Cards"
by Kathie

Life Deals the Cards
"Boy aint this the truth", Very nicely put.
To bad we dont have some wild card,s every once and awhile,,lol. Thanks so much for shareing this one with us, I really like it.
"Keep on inkin the Pages"
Poison

P.S.
I'll take two cards please

( Posted by: POISON9901 [Member] On: April 20, 2006 )

deal em out
a very interesting metaphor for life imagen every day conversation to have this metaphor in it for example "last night i got handed a hand of kings "
ad instead of kudos "aces" thank you im oing to start saying aces from now on so dont copy me
so i will now say aces for the good poem
aces for the new ideas and
thak you for the enjoying thout
hope to read more
sincerly
ze'wolfe

( Posted by: wolfe [Member] On: April 21, 2006 )





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