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For my dear friend, with a thousand thank you's to go with it...

Her noise creates a whisper.
Listen closely...
the sound of words makes a destiny for poets.

Her life, the ink,
taken for granted on paper,
captures it's mark on all privileged to feel it.

Let the wind chime in her presence.

------
I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler


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The following comments are for "Windchime"
by nae411

A gem
Our Lucy is indeed a gem ...her words are like a beautiful Wind Chime singing in the wind...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: April 19, 2006 )

charming windchime
Nae, this is a lovely tribute to Lucie, and oh so true! How nice to read of your meeting with one of our favorite Canadians, and this is such an appropriate post for the occassion!
I'm jealous of the two of you! (But happy for you as well!) Maybe someday we will have a Lit.org convention! Maybe we all need an on-line spring-fling thread! (Maybe Ivor will read this and get the ball rolling ;)
Hope to be back more often...
best to you-
Elizabeth

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: April 19, 2006 )

i just couldn't agree more
with the above comments. i love this poem. it's just so spot-on!!!

j.jd.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: April 19, 2006 )

Windy
This is a lovely poem, and a fine tribute. Windchime shoudl be deeply honoured.

The love between you two is both inspiring and faintly erotic.

(Kidding!)

(Only about that third sentence!)

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: April 19, 2006 )

a convention
yes a convention does seem nice
a nice way to meet the critics and the helpers and you ronline friends "wounder how many of the lit .org crew is emo"

( Posted by: schindees [Member] On: April 19, 2006 )

Party at mom's house!
I live in Virginia... name the date!
E-

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: April 20, 2006 )

Lit's coming together
Thank you for your comments. Lucie is amazing she deserves so much more than a few words.

I am all for a get together and I know I'll be there, name a place and time and let's do it!

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: April 20, 2006 )

Lucie, Nae, Viper!
Yes, this one's indeed FAINTLY EROTIC! LOL!

I love this Nae, I love reading about my idol. And reading my idol wrote something for my idol! geez, this is a lovely treat!

Love you both, P

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: April 20, 2006 )

Lucie is really Great!
Well, This poem is a fine tribute to a great person in flesh and blood. Thank u Nae for this excellent poem.

There is one chiming bell kinda thing which many people hang it in front of their houses. It chimes wonderfully whenever wind blows. I remember 'Wind Chime' whenever I see it. I have one too in front of our house.

Really Lucie is great. She has really chimed with the wind, but more importantly with time.

She has encouraged many poets, including me. Thanks a lot Lucie. I pray that u should live a long...long time and also pen many more wonderful poems.

Also ur and Nae's friendship should last forever.

Take care both.

Regards,

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 22, 2006 )

When & Where,,,I'll be there!
Hey Nae...have been away for awhile and just saw this...about my two favorite people!

Wish I could have been with you...I know it must have been a blast. Just let me know when and where this reunion will take place and I'll be there...come hell or high water.

We've been talking about this for at least three years...before Lit became as big as it has...now we'll need name tags at least!

Love ya both
Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: April 23, 2006 )

Madam again
Respected Madam

This sound like the temple bell ring by breeze in tinny village of mine.

( Posted by: Gorakekalloo [Member] On: May 3, 2006 )

windchime tribute by nae
what a tribute to behold. really good.

( Posted by: unseenwriterx [Member] On: May 3, 2006 )

Nae and Windchime
Two beautiful and talented ladies!

( Posted by: michaeI [Member] On: May 3, 2006 )





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