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One man,two nails, one tree.
Sacrifice made
Law fulfilled
Redemption
to all who will believe.

One man, two nails, one tree.
Promise made
Promise kept
Peace
to all who will believe.

One man, two nails, one tree
Death conquered
Life offered
Freedom
to all who will believe.




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The following comments are for "One Man"
by songofcree

one man
Thank you for your kind words, it was written with simplicity in mind. The path to such redemption, peace and freedom has been made completely simple. It is man (we) that make it so hard to find.

( Posted by: songofcree [Member] On: April 23, 2006 )





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