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Kiss of Death

One fatal bite was all that it took
The temptations of eternal life that could not be shook
Promises are made that can never be kept
These things he promised you while you slept

Voices you hear that slowly drive you insane
Feeling his poison coursing thru your veins
Your body on fire as his evil takes hold
The touch of your skin now ever so cold

Children of the night beckoning you to come play
For you must return home before the light of day
Calling you always as you yearn for the night
Awaiting for the moment when your body takes flight

Fighting the urges your thirst grows stronger
Feeling compelled you cant hold back any longer
Fearing the evil that drives you from within
You step into the night and a new life begins

Without any direction you wander the haze
Searching the streets of the city as if it were a maze
A yearning inside driving your mind like a wheel
Looking for a life with a soul to steal

Draining there bodies they cant resist your touch
Death is all that remains once they fall into your evil clutch
The sweet taste of blood and the smell of death
Satisfying your needs as they draw their last breath

You gave of yourself The Kiss of Death


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The following comments are for "Kiss of Death"
by POISON9901

buetiful uses of similies and imagrey but it also
seems to have a metaphorical view of giving your life away o somthing very goood 10

( Posted by: schindees [Member] On: April 19, 2006 )

My Vamp,s
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my material. My darker side is shinning thru once again. Thanks again and Im glad you liked.

( Posted by: POISON9901 [Member] On: April 19, 2006 )

it waz good
the dark side seems to write well i hope to see more from that dark side of yours

( Posted by: schindees [Member] On: April 19, 2006 )

My Vamp,,,,,
Thanks once again,,,You can find more like this one that I have already posted,,,Bone of my Bone, Children of the Night ect,ect,ect.
Enjoy and again Thanks

( Posted by: POISON9901 [Member] On: April 19, 2006 )

Deadly Kisses
hey you, hope you are walking the day-light side right now. Interesting little vampire piece. I kind of could read what would come next, but that's not a bad thing, just think you reverted to a bit of cliche' phrases to desribe your experience(?) It would be fun to see you work this into (BWoz's?) cliche' thread.
I was left wanting to invite your vampire to tea-
(I could serve blood oranges?)

thanks for the write, and blessings-

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: April 21, 2006 )

Really a great poem Kiss of Death and yes, deadly kisses.



( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 22, 2006 )

Poison Kisses
emaks, Yes I do still walk in the light, But only with bullfrog 95 sunblocker and some very dark shades,,,,LOL. Thanks for the comment and I will surely see if I cant manage something that will compliment BWoz,s thread. Again thanks for the read

( Posted by: POISON9901 [Member] On: April 22, 2006 )

Poison Kisses P.S.
Thanks for the oranges,, Blood that is, My fav...LOL

( Posted by: POISON9901 [Member] On: April 22, 2006 )

Vamp Smooche,s
Thanks for the read and the comment. Once again I bow to you sir.

( Posted by: POISON9901 [Member] On: April 22, 2006 )

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