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ching..ching..
click..
doot.dot.dit.dot.dit..dit.dit
ring..ring...ring....
hello..
charlie..
what jhonie..
do you remember the number for 411
yeah its 411
thanks charlie bye
your wel..owng.......buzzzzz
ching..ching..
click.
doot.dot.dot
hello
is this 411
yes...
i need to know an adress
state
new york
city
gotham city
adress
the bat cave
?your name..
bat man
what
batman..
where are you looking for againg
click...
chick..
hello..
onstar
yes..
i need to know an adress
where
the bat cave
your name
batman
wha
b-a-t-m-a-n
click
click..
dowee..dot.dot.doot.dot.dot
charlie
yes jhony
do you have the keys to the bat mobile
not againg
yeah ..
charlie picks up gun and loads it
c-r-e-a-k
charlie..
charlie..
bang!!!

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i am a misuderstood lunatic



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