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There are days that come and smiles fill our eyes,
But there are others that show up with clouds filling our skies!
Life is hard, yet it is sweet
And its sweetness comes when we go thru this hardness and get over it .
No matter that problems always precede
At the end the goodness will surely defeat

Revised April 15 06
7 30pm

The sweet is never as sweet without the sour, and I know the sour which allows me to appreciate the sweet.

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The following comments are for "Life"
by fairgrace

Yes, Goodness will surely defeat in the end. It is like a circle, you know. Everything rotates..I mean the cycle of goodness.....badness...happiness..... sorrow...But the proportion may vary.

Also whenever I visit this site. I'll be happy if I find ur writing. Thanks for posting.

Keep writing, Hiba. Take care and all the best.



( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 18, 2006 )

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