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Rain of Memory...
by Robinbird (Member) - published: April 15, 2006
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Category - Poetry
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The weary memories

Are my roots...

The window to traces

Inside my stare...

Like ice cubes gone,

The tears wash away my face.

Robinbird


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by Robinbird

too late fozen...Robin
Yes, we are frozen fragments moments if our past, haunting us until no more.

good condensed write,

macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: April 15, 2006 )

Robin-Rain of Memory..
Ha,ha,ha, It's not tit for tat, buddy. I mean the 9 I gave u. Nice poem...Title too is great..But I feel it could have been better considering ur power house of talent. Seeing the title I had expected more...Let me try a poem with the same title..I am sure it can't be better.

Nice one. Thanks for posting. Take care and always keep smiling.


GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 18, 2006 )





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