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welcome welcome
one and all
to the circus of
fear and fun
children laugh and
cry like milloins of dying sheep
the lions roar as the children
flee from
he nightmare of their
own creation

i am a misuderstood lunatic

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by schindees


I relate to this since it reminds me of how human nature crates its own chaos to feel alive, otherwise life would be boring. Sometimes the “child in us misses that clown with the cotton candy”. We flee from our own nightmare because we follow someone else’s dream or we can’t communicate effectively.


( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: April 15, 2006 )

This tells me that sometimes life can be a three ring ...the clowns...fear...falling and not having a net to catch you...Daddy and Mommy playing softball or taking you swimming...and the next minute turning into an abuser...children trying to understand why these bad things a scarey nightmare...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: April 15, 2006 )

every one my acount has been ram sacked and the schindees acount will be inactive so this is my new acount please belive me

( Posted by: wolfe [Member] On: April 15, 2006 )

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