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~~Goodbye~~

I know about surroundings and somethig of the cost
(something to get lost)
I know Iím going forewards, cause I can see where I have been
(are you coming in?)

Is it wrong, to give up a piece of me?
Is it wrong, to live up to being me?

Weíre not here to change the world, too demanding of our fears
(so take me far away from here)

and all I need to know is that youíre here
and thereís no sence in waiting for anyone to save us
and thereís no sence in crying over what weíve see today
and I will never free you
and I will never see you again

Is it wrong to let everything go?
Is it wrong to let everybody know?

Goodbye!

~~d~~

I play the devilís advocate on the mortal coils of this thread
Another ugly d-wordís running through my vacant head
A sick and dying message but we still try to recieve
You try not to let it bother you as you pretend to believe

Everything will be alright

A bad joke in an ally tell you where youíll be in ten yearís time
thereís no space above your rooftop while a pleasand sickness veils your eyes
And even though I know whatís gone away
I still believe each word you say

There he is, try to rest my friend
Weíll live to someday try again
this is not over

~~Chrysalis~~

Wait, for the second time around,
wait for a chance to open her up

Look, all around inside,
before you move you re-arrange her

If only I could say a word
If only she could run away
if only I could stand, somehow stand to face the new word

Time, maybe another time,
itís too late to ever bring her back

Feel, as free as time allows you,
I hope sometime you remember where you came from

If only she could just decide
If only roads would open wide
If only I could stand, somehow stand to face the new world

~~A Thousand Stories~~

She finally openís her eyes
Getís dressed and takes a look around
She writes a letter to the man, she met last night
itís time to leave, returning to life

Itís all I knew the night before,
and now itís done,
but what would it change to wonder why

But this can be as good as the real thing
A thousand stories every dawn
a thousand ways it could have been, or maybe next time
cause people change, cause weíve all tried

Itís all I knew the night before,
and now itís gone,
but what would it change to wonder
how it is that people seem to
stay away from anything
that could unshine
that could outshine their light

Once again she drives away
Pink Floydís on the radio
she lights her morning cigarrette, drinks her coffee
brings herself, back to her life

~~Therapy for Karma~~

The creature is growing, showing signs of waking up
I live on the outside, a horrid apparition

you send me your intentions
you leave me feeling cold
and part of me is never home

Behavior for nothing, showing signs of no regret
Therapy for Karma, knowing is the nature...

Of all our good intentions
and every right we wrong
and part of me will make it all alone

And with it comes the knowledge
to which the end of time
itís the nature of the self to never try

The creature is empty, the creature is frightened of itself

~~Autumnís Fallen~~

we are, the stars are who we are
and we see, just who weíre supposed to be
you cannot find the seam, so dream

we can run, letís run away from here
we save face, thereís nothing left to fear
we will not run away, from here

the story of the fallen
letís throw the past away
letís save her from her fate

and cry a million lies
and weíll see, how many times weíve tried
you canot find the seam, so dream

I lied, letís throw the past away
I tried, letís save her from her face
I lied, letís throw the past away
I tried, let's save her from her face

@2002 modus operandi manifesto


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The following comments are for "A few More songs"
by eleventeen

Slowly
I would first like to ssay that i do like these lyrics a lot. Someday (when i have more energy)i may come back and review them song by song. However, i do have one suggestion that cannot wait, This is something that has helped me out quite a bit. Honestly, i would have posted these lyrics individually. One: more people are likely to read and comment on one song than they are 3 or 4. Two: it allows you to become a bit more active and involved in the site. If you span the posting out, it give you more time to look over comments on a particular song, and it makes it a little easier for the reader to comment. Generally, groups of lyrics on this site don't get read as much as individual songs on this site. This is just a little tip from a fellow lyricist. (If you looked at my bio, i have published virtually nothing but lyrics.) I like these lyrics a lot, but they probably would be read more had they been posted individually over a period of maybe about a week.

( Posted by: E.G. Evans [Member] On: September 26, 2002 )

you're probably right
You probably have a point there, but the thing is that I have a TON of lyrics. I chose to print these ones purely on the basis of that I recorded the songs quite recently, in actuality, I've got (and this is no exageration, just ask rogan) upwards of 95-100 songs written down in one place or another. If I posted all of them, let alone idividually, i'd probably wind up flooding the board. Not to mention I don't get a whole lot of time to spend online and usually have to take what I can get.

Either way, thanks for the encouragement, I put a lot into these songs nd it's nice to hear that people are getting something out of them.

( Posted by: eleventeen [Member] On: October 6, 2002 )





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