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When the poem calls the tears
the eyes support lips
where are you among passers-by
the eyes go astray in the gravel road

flower bloomed with the sunrise
withered now oh! it's new moon day
still remember the day you left me
think, how can I bear the heart-ache

Nocturnes over flown from the chimney of house
spread in the surrounded hills
when thunder roared and rain began
I saw the shadow of yours appeared on my door mat


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