Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
7

(1 votes)


RatingRated by
7Unknown

You must login to vote

I left,
Taken from your waiting arms,
Unaware that they were waiting for me.
We belonged to each other, once...
I had no idea you still cared,
Let alone loved me, even longed for me.

You still love me?
Why?

I've changed since we last met.
Life makes sense, as do I.
I'd like to think I'm wiser now,
But to say so would destroy that.

I've looked over everything,
vanquished beliefs, endorsed ideas.
So many things have disappeared, yet
You always remained constant.

What could I possibly have done in life
To deserve such love as this?

I may never know.

------
'He who knows others is learned. He who knows himself is wise.'
-Lao Tzu

'Tomorrow will take us away,
Far from home--
No one will ever know our names,
But the bards' songs will remain.
Tomorrow, all will be known,
And You're not alone,
So don't be afraid
In the dark and cold
'Cause the bards' songs will remain.
They all will remain
In my thoughts and in my dreams
They're always in my mind....
Come close Your eyes;
You can see them, too.'
Blind Guardian,
The Bard's Song: Into the Forest


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Unaware"
by the Co.konspirator

Enjoyed

I liked your poem a lot. It really allows the reader to get a first hand view of questioning love.

Good work.

100 B.

( Posted by: 100 Bullets [Member] On: September 30, 2002 )

Lovely...
...poem, Co.Kon.

Very touching.

--Jasmine

( Posted by: Jasmine [Member] On: October 1, 2002 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: