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The rain falls hard upon my face
I see your shadow
I feel your grace
You are one that has long since passed
So far away
You escape my grasp
The pain I feel
Appears on the surface
I will not heal
My blood has drained
My color is gone
Empty are my veins
What went wrong?

DJ '08

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