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Wolfs
Wolves cry out with fear and pain...
...as they lay dying in the snow.
Your howls of bewilderment will echo
with the mountain winds.
And your songs will join those of the whales.
I stop in wonder.
There I see a standing wolf,
Eyes fixed upon the moon.

a collage of poetry that i tweeked
for school

------
i am a misuderstood lunatic


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The following comments are for "wolfs"
by schindees

wild
i think it's alittle too much like a collage for me right now...
but there is soemthing alluring about wild animals.

( Posted by: ruina [Member] On: April 12, 2006 )

lots of interesting
images. i like your poem, greatly.

john.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: April 12, 2006 )





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