Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
9

(1 votes)


RatingRated by
9johnjohndoe

You must login to vote

It is a story of a ghost of seventeen years girl and you will be astonished to know that this story is about me .It is the story of re-born also how come a ghost reborn and just typing her own story -------
I am a ghost of seventeen years .I want to tell you all of that I lived in London My name was Anugya I remember a little bit but know that Im a Christian girl .
I lost my father when I was just twelve and we left only two in our house me and my mother .I loved my mother so much .Circumstances hit us day by day after the death of my father .We lived as poor but one day a tragedy happened my mother I donít know from how much time but she lost her character and went into that business but I remember she loved me so much we used to live as best friend with each other .
I remember my all friends two boys I forgot their names and 1 girl and me . We used to go church daily or on Sunday . but after fourteen or fifteen I just fall in love with a boy who was six or seven years big from me . And perhaps it was love cum commitment or agreement I donít remember much.
He loves me or tried to use me I didnít remember but he had given me so much money . My mother liked him . He never agreed to marry with me but he just want to live with me and always showed love to me. What had happened next I donít remember and by this only I slapped most. The story would never end ---------

Just tried to express my emotions comment plsssss Iíll be repost thisÖÖÖ..








Comments

The following comments are for "A ghost story"
by page3

Ghost...
The idea is good and it could've been better. .. Try to improve it if possible.

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 12, 2006 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: