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You're so beautiful my Lord,
That gives light to the world, to me and my soul.

The clear, sunny skies that belongs to you,
Pretty views to my eyes.

The air I breath comes from You,
Maintain my life alive.

The chirping of birds, sweet songs singing,
Music to my ears.

The raindrops falling, dropping into my skin,
Pouring out the stream of my pain.

The trees swaying through the wind,
Pamper my soul emotion with peace.

The moonlit shining, stars twinkling through the night,
That keeps me wondering the beauty of You.

The figure of clouds changing by the whip of a gentle breeze,
Makes me believe; Hopes to my dreams.

Amazing beauty from within conquered my whole being,
To cling in faith, trust, believe and
Live with You, my Jesus.

Copyright (c) Elaine Sy
25th of March 2006-3:05pm


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The following comments are for "Beauty of God"
by ailei

Awesome!
As far as I'm concerned that poem could have finished with "Selah." I mean it could almost be a praise song! Way to go!

( Posted by: sixstrungout [Member] On: April 12, 2006 )





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