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watch a bomb break the silence,
of the passive has-beens,
as they come crashing to truth,
the ashes float past their eyelids,
their souls attached to the roof.

watch a bullet spear a sunbeam,
and a child cry in darkness,
vile crooked artists staring,
targeting death harboring fruit
no tree is capable of bearing.

watch a blade glide in tommorow,
a galaxy in twisted helixes,
feeling your self touch god,
and cry at the realization
of the need to be fake
to understand what realness is.

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A Finger For Reality
We can count the real World...
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( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 25, 2015 )

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