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A thought of you springs from
inside my mind, causing a chemical
reaction to occur within my body.
Scintillating warmth flows from

head to toe, coursing a way to the
core of my heart where it leaves an
indelible impression, like a time-
less love song. An experience of

something unseen, untouched, yet
inextricably felt. A thought so
potent that it binds two entities
together as one. This silent exchange

moves beyond all boundaries, beyond
anything tangible, beyond permutation.
It is the cause of all that I am...
it is my reason for being.

"Until the juice ferments a while in the cask,
it isn't wine. If you wish your heart to be bright, you must do a little work." Rumi

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The following comments are for "Silent Exchange"
by eleda

Hi! Eleda, I liked this one too.


( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 6, 2006 )

Silent Exchange
Who would of ever thought it would take so many words to describe a look. Although not just any look, but a sly sexy look. Very nice.
"Keep on inkin the Pages"

( Posted by: POISON9901 [Member] On: April 6, 2006 )

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