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Dawn is but a shadow, of the night sky, leaving us in absence after a glorious and starfilled night, but leading way to a sunfilled araising which in all its glories will fill the sky with light and warmth as none compare!

The dawn will awaken a new, and bring light and hope to those who dispare, for this is the glory brought forth when all fears are cast aside and hope and truth are brought to light in "The New Dawn" !!

By: George V Forsythe

George V Forsythe

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The following comments are for ""The New Dawn""
by stingra

Nice one....
"The New Dawn" has a nice message in it. Thanks for posting.


( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 6, 2006 )

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