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Sometimes there are things
that you can't keep inside.
They find their way out,
even though you tried to hide.
Sometimes there are things
that must be made known.
Or else tey'll eat you alive
when in the night, you're alone.
And sometimes there are feelings
that cannot be expressed.
Only sensed by one another,
beating deep inside your chest.
But always there is something,
something needing to be heard.
Never released by it's keeper
but kept caged like a bird.
So tell me most truly,
how I make you feel.
Because without you, my only
none of this feels quite real...


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The following comments are for "Sometimes"
by pLp420

I agree with you. Sometimes we can't tell everything out. It is locked in our chest or heart.

Nice job.


( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 6, 2006 )

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