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The mist is thick, trees so tall
Magic here is know by all
Mystical woods beyond my eye
Cannot see when I pass it by

The imagination unlocks the door
To this place of mystery never known before
When I enter through my imagination
I see all the wonders of mystical creations

Breathtaking is this place I'm in
My journey here will now begin
As I look beyond to see the trees
Beautiful pink flowers through the mist I see

The air so thick yet so divine
As I'm walking along I look behind
For the noise I hear is the sound of man
I'd loved before out side this land

But how can this be for he is deceased
Yet standing there, his love he released
He takes my hand and walks me to
The magical place that we once knew

I sit with him, talk of before
Time spent together made me love him more
But it occured to me, once I leave this place
Our lips will never touch, our bodys won't embrace

My heart is saddened, as he wipes my tears
Donít worry he said, don't you have no fears
Then he whispered softly, never forget this
As he leaned over, gently gave me a kiss

When my eyes opened I was alone again
But my heart was happy I knew I'd see him when
I open my heart and mind to the door
Of the Mystical Woods and my love for evermore!

------
Catherine R. Sawyer


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The following comments are for "Mysyical Woods"
by mom11159

Mystical Woods
You really are trying to make me a big fan,,,,,I like this. I like the misty , foggy, kinda thick gray veil typa thing ya got going on in there. Very nice touch. And the deceased lover. Another cool touch. Again very nice and thanks for shareing.
"Keep on inkin the Pages"
Poison

( Posted by: POISON9901 [Member] On: April 5, 2006 )

fan
POISON9901 isn't that what is all about fans lol.
Thanks again for reading and commenting so very very very much appreciated
Cathy

( Posted by: mom11159 [Member] On: April 6, 2006 )





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