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It's a slip.
A move, it's the grave
and the word.
That dies.

It's a cold shower
in April,
A blue summer sky
in fall.
And it's all the
feel
we'll ever feel.

So Goodbye...

Goodbye to us
And goodbye
to
all the
Whispery clouds
and summer
Roller coasters

Goodbye...
Adele.


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by 0207070

Adele
Wow, the title of this poem seized my attention. And as I read it, the meaning behind the words struck a resonant chord within my heart. Very touching poem...I will be sure to look for more so please keep writing!

( Posted by: eleda [Member] On: April 6, 2006 )





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