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Think

Think…do think again,
There should a better way,
A better way out of this situation,
A better solution to this problem,
A better path in life
To lead than to follow.
A better goal for you to reach.
Think…do think again,
As most of the problems,
Are due to lack of ideas,
Ideas that can take you places.
Lose anything you may have,
But not your hope and confidence.
Take it easy; don’t frown,
A better future could be,
Just at the dawn.

By :- GSVK



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http://gsvasukumar.blogspot.com/


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The following comments are for "Think"
by G.S.VASUKUMAR

Creative Vision
GSV;
Enjoyed the read.... it all starts with a thought!



Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: April 4, 2006 )

think
A really possitive outlook on life.
Yes,a sage you are.
Keep up the good work!
Looking forward to reading more of your works.
whilst

( Posted by: whilst [Member] On: April 6, 2006 )

Thanks...Whilst
I'm not a sage. I am normal.Thanks for reading and posting comments.

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 7, 2006 )

think...GSVK
as spoke earlier, so good to see you...I wanted to rate this a nine, not that it is less than ten, only I personally would have worded some different, so I'll carry the 9...mostly I liked the idea THINK, also as most of the problems, are due to lack of ideas, so true, so very true.
This is a nice piece, I feel has been overlooked. This is "just Robin", this is a good thinking peice of work.

ROBIN

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: April 8, 2006 )

9 is ok..Robin
Why don't u post of late ? Kindly write and post. Why not try with 'Think'...I mean ur version of the same title...just think.

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 8, 2006 )





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