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Luck

Something that is so strange,
Yet it is so dear to so many.
It doesnít have a mind to think,
Who is the one who really
deserves to win.
Sometimes it kicks someone
So hard,
That he succeeds without
much effort,
And is praised for his
effortless effort.
Sometimes those who work hard,
And when their effort
meets with success,
Luck steals the show
and their effort too.
I wonder how luck
really works,
Today it may land
on your shoulders,
And tomorrow on mine perhaps.

By :- GSVK


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http://gsvasukumar.blogspot.com/


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The following comments are for "Luck"
by G.S.VASUKUMAR

True
a true poem that rarely can be written last lines were awesome.
keep writting like this. :)

( Posted by: page3 [Member] On: April 6, 2006 )

Page3
Thanks for ur comments.I will try to write like this.

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 6, 2006 )





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