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The trees stand tall, very proud
Leaves so green they speak out loud
The bark so strong, it withstands all time
Roots embedded, they are so prime

Grass so green all around the trees
Sun shinning, the sounds of bees
Butterflies flutter their beautiful wings
Birds come out they start to sing

Sight of the hummingbird, such a beautiful site
Out comes the squirrels to enjoy the daylight
Rabbits are eating then hopping along
While crickets are rubbing their legs for a song

The wolves are protecting their family and land
While bears walk about, making their demand
Almighty eagles soaring up high
Beautiful white doves fly in the sky

Fish swimming in the beautiful creek
Swans floating on the pond so sheik
Mosquitoes are biting, most of the day
Fireflies ignite, to light up the way

Deer in the field running so proudly
While geese in the sky are squawking so loudly
Stars twinkle in a beautiful delight
Bright glowing moon what a wonderful sight

The smell of the campfire in the air
The hoots of the owls everywhere
Oh how enticing is the beauty we see
When enjoying Natures Festivies

Catherine R. Sawyer

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The following comments are for "Natures Festivities"
by mom11159

Nature in AA BB

Loved it, bright and breezy and all's well with the world.

Oh how enticing is the beauty we see
When enjoying Natures Festivies

I have just passed comment to another poet to say where I feel AA BB rhyme should be used and this is the perfect example!



( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: April 2, 2006 )

Just love getting your comments on my poems thank you so very much for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciatie it very very much.

( Posted by: mom11159 [Member] On: April 2, 2006 )

Natures Festivities
Very well put. I love this poem. It flows well and the rhyming is perfect. Another one of your great pieces. Thanks for shareing.
"Keep on inkin the Pages"

( Posted by: POISON9901 [Member] On: April 2, 2006 )

Thank you so very very much POISON9901 for your wonderful comment and for taking the time to read I truly appreciate very much.

( Posted by: mom11159 [Member] On: April 3, 2006 )

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