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I'm looking at you. I'm smiling at you. You can hate a stump. You can get mad at a stump. But you can not love a stump. I'm looking at you. I'm smiling at you. Oh, me like you. Me like you to me love you. I'm looking at you. I'm smiling at you. You don't understand. Ugh...that's okay. I'm looking at you. I'm smiling at you. I know all kinds of things about your mom that you don't know. I'm looking at you. I'm smiling at you. This is *******, momma is mad at you. I'm looking at you. I'm smiling at you. Suicide again. Why do you keep dangling that in front of me? I'm looking at you. I'm smiling at you. Kill yourself, please. I'm looking at you. I'm smiling at you. You used to scare me. When we were together all you wanted to talk about was how you wanted to kill yourself. I'm looking at you. I'm smiling at you. You are a mess. I'm looking at you. I'm smiling at you. I have to figure out if this is worth saving. I'm looking at you. I'm smiling at you. You are worthless. You just let me kick you around like a piece of garbage. I'm looking at you. I'm smiling at you. You told me you don't have any feelings. Well, I'm just the opposite. I'm looking at you. I'm smiling at you. I'm pouring my heart out and you don't seem to notice. I'm looking at you. I'm smiling at you. I figured out a long time ago that I don't love you. What we had turned into a friendship. I'm looking at you. I'm smiling at you. You're like a child. All you can talk about is monkeys. I'm looking at you. I'm smiling at you. My mom says you're ugly and juvenile and you couldn't care less if you saw somebody being killed. I'm looking at you. I'm smiling at you. Just go ahead and kill yourself. You're not wanted anyhow.


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