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You know what?
*uck you.
every time you come here, we fight
every time I see you, I cry like a bitch
and then we *uck
and then we leave each other
Guess what?
*uck you.
I have never hated anything,
never felt like suicide,
until you showed up.
I am all tense-
wired muscles tied to the bone.
I look across at you.
"*uck me eyes."
Why are you being nice to the bartender "eyes".?
Why can't you look at me?
eyes in the back of my head.
You ate me.
You hate me.
you gave birth to me
and then ate me like a male hamster
dining on newborns
*uck you.

I missed you.
cigarettes
booze
and my early twenties
cause see, I can write about that now,
time has showed me
what happens to your skin

I could never stand your prank of philosophy
How you wanted to talk and talk about how the world "spins"
and how I am a white man
and you are a brown women

I want my children to have color
something, that for me, being a white man
is hard to feel
is something I should never write about


and you
it's never good to write about you.












------
Lee Leslie can be found @ myspace.com/expressionsession and Leo.altpro.net


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by LeeLeslie

WOW
hey man I love this it's all raw emotion good work never quit!!!!Peace

( Posted by: twistymisty [Member] On: March 30, 2006 )





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