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I've seen it too

black lace silhouettes -
they are trees bathing
in the deep waters
of the indigo blue sky
pampered with moonlight




[after Penelope's 'night shift']


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Sua sponte,
O.


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by City

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thank you

( Posted by: City [Member] On: March 27, 2006 )

night walk
so few words say so very much with such beauty. Loved it
Cathy

( Posted by: mom11159 [Member] On: April 1, 2006 )





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