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Space and time are intertwined
Realatively where is time?

If space is here then time is too
If time is here then space makes two

A linear measure from future-past
Present is the measure cast

Momement by moment time we check
Memory by memory we recollect

A philosophical time is here
It flows from past to future year

Speed is aslo part of mind
Travel in vacuum another kind

Mesa, AZ
Philosophy Class

Daniel Lloyd Kennedy

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The following comments are for "A Theory Within Time"
by daprdan

chasing the moment
don't try to ping
to "here" and "now"
flowing time
it flies


( Posted by: City [Member] On: March 26, 2006 )

Space and Time
This piece starts with the assumption:

"Space and time are intertwined"

If Space and Time are intertwined
what happens when the clock unwinds.
Dimensions surely come to play
in mixing time and space this way.

The lifetime of an ant you see
Is not the life of you or me.
The total world in this ants space
Is just to us, a tiny place.
Does ant and man live space and time
In measurements that intertwine?

I fear that somewhere things don't meet,
to work this out would me defeat.
Now think how we could draw the line,
if we just knew where Space met Time!


For some reason this reminds me of the old question:

What happens when an irrisistable force meets an immoveable object?

Have Fun,


( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: March 26, 2006 )

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