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A twinkling star a sparkle sky ,
A very dark night like a spy ,
A cold night but two hearts hot ,
Hand that holds together with shy ,
A twinkling star a sparkle sky…..

Soft music soft wind blowing ,
Suddenly a tear fall from his eye ,
We left hugging and kissing now ,
He put his head on my lap, we both cry ,
A twinkling star a sparkle sky…..

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Its a song I just tried to fulfill conditions.How's it please tell me.


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