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Roses pity and sweet Lily ,
Water comes down silly ,

All scenes of nature ,
Made me feel something queer ,

Sun’s shine and moon’s madness for night ,
Catch me in your arms tight ,

Keep conversation between stars and stones ,
They’ll will teach you only to do love ,

Love the nature
Love only for your own sake ,
Do not try to hurt nature ,
If you do you will make a mistake.

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The following comments are for "Song of nature"
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This was a nice poem but the word queer in this to me just doesn't fit. Maybe using the words serene, peaceful, something on that line. Other than that I loved it great job.

( Posted by: mom11159 [Member] On: March 28, 2006 )

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