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blending of spirits
natures nectar decanted
life's vessel refilled

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The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.
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The following comments are for "Conception"
by ivordavies

Conception
Ivor, I would have not have thought this to be yours! Not because you aren't able it just seems so different. I must say I completely enjoyed every word, so little words, so much said. Bravo my friend.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: March 24, 2006 )

Conception
Lucie,
I totally agree with you, I do not think haiku should be titled and I was extremely tempted to leave the title off this one. I even thought of putting a 'lame' title on it but this would have worked against the piece.

Nae,
Guessed you'd pop in! This haiku is meant to have many meanings and I had hoped that as wide an interpretation of the word 'Conception' could be envisaged as in any form this is what I was relating it to.

Anyway, I think you need a word with my wife, love to know why you felt this was not me after our meeting at Lit Org ball....

Have Fun,

Ivor
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conĚcepĚtion ( P ) Pronunciation Key (kn-spshn)
n.

Formation of a viable zygote by the union of the male sperm and female ovum; fertilization.

The entity formed by the union of the male sperm and female ovum; an embryo or zygote.

The ability to form or understand mental concepts and abstractions.

Something conceived in the mind; a concept, plan, design, idea, or thought. See Synonyms at idea.

Archaic. A beginning; a start.
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but I like your selection the best.....

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: March 24, 2006 )

thought that was our secret
Ahem... Ivor, we are supposed to keep "lit ball" low key... laughing.

Signed,
The Temptress

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: March 24, 2006 )

Ivor's Blending
a key word here

as with your poetry I find this uniquely devine and intriguing.....because I, like your other readers put myself in and pull a bit of myself out of this...

SO good to read you and see the familiar faces gracing this page.

be well and in peace,
Dar

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: March 24, 2006 )

Blending with 'Shite' ?
Dar,

Thank you, unlike my other poetry, I have to work to produce haiku and usually it makes my brain hurt! It is good to receive feedback to confirm that I had got over the meanings I intended.

On a lighter side:

' put myself in and pull a bit of myself out of this...'

this sounds a good formula for posting on my 'shite' thread!

Have Fun,

Ivor



( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: March 24, 2006 )

a verbal cocktail
The decanted nature
is to be spirited down
to the perfection

vessel refilled
with refined spirits
returns to nature

nectars enriched
with natural spirits
blend in the vessel


sorry, couldn't help writing!
such a subject... :)

( Posted by: City [Member] On: March 27, 2006 )





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